It Seems
by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Oct 18, 2007
|
It seems to me like you don't care anymore. You say you love me but I don't know if I should believe it. Maybe we weren't meant to be. I always thought you were gonna be there for the rest of my life but I can see its not gonna happen. You're drifting apart from me and it hurts so bad. The tears in my eyes won't lead me to you, but they roll down because only they know how much you really mean to me. |
Did You Like This Poem?
Latest Comments
-
16 years ago
Short and sweet, with a touch of sadness....overall it was well written although with an odd form...not confusing in the least bit though. Interesting 5/5
-
16 years ago
by Hurtingsoul
I find this bittersweet and sad. overall its a good poem you make the flow just a little better but 5/5
Take Care
xHSx -
16 years ago
by claire
Okay um no offense but the "u" and "driftin" dont add anything, and make it a bit im-ish. the prose-like style's really original though, and i love the last bit about the tears =)
-
16 years ago
Wow, the words in this is so true about how sevweral people feel.. i feel this way now and the feelin wont go away.. i loved this very much
