by Cooper Oct 23, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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The apple hangs, in the shade of trees, |
by she
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A dying fragment of a real girl, |
by Lonely Rider
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" and mourns the loss, of a dream come true; |
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Wow thats just amazing. i related so well......wow...is all i can say. keep it up.. |
by mier
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Hey, is this inspired by the song 'vivica' from jack off jill? Anyhow, I love the flow of the words.. Stunningly beautiful.. You always come up with the most creative ideas to write about.. This poem is just extraordinary! Love every bit of it... |
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I agree with NyellMoonlight. |