This was so touching it made me teary...
but i still loved it
xx

Hey if u read this and that poem is True i have to say something your mother will always love you trust me im 15 and i have put my mother through hell i have ran away from home i've tryed killing myself i have tryed everything im now pregnant and live with my 20 year old boyfriend and guess where i am right now at my mothers you mother will always love you

It was sad but good. You did a good job.

This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! I almost cried, it is so sad. So real...........

Hey i love ur poem!!It is so good! but its so sad..im sorry to hear that!it seemed like u were standin rite in front of me and tellin me in person everythin u wrote down! nice work!

This poem is really touching...i love it

"Did Daddy leave because of me?
Is he off searching to find the daughter I could never be?"

relatable...... 5/5 xo.

So sad, very heart wrenching poem. Loved the way it flowed, 5/5

Wow. i really like this poem, it flows nicely and the rhyme scheme is spot on. your vert talented.

It was really sad but i loved it

Made me want to cry!
Such a fantastic poem!
Please keep writing!

Danielle
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The rhetorical questions are really great making this piece an eye-catching and attention gaining one. Great work

Tc
Fsams

The was so sad! D: Such a wonderful poem that flowed so smoothly! And rhymed as well! Amazing! 5/5

I really liked this one. It had a really good flow, and you could feel just how sad the little girl was. I liked how you put "Mummy" instead of "Mommy" you could actually tell how the little girl sounded.

The only thing I saw wrong was:
"Mummy, why won't you look at me?
All you do is cry cos I look like Daddy."

Me and Daddy didn't really rhyme, but I loved this poem so much I didn't really care. Great job!

Wow,
this is an amazing poem. i rlly enjoeyd readin this. im goin through this n ii can rlly feel ur pain in this. the poem is strong through the whole thing to the end. love it.. well deserved 5/5

That was brilliant, It made me cry though very sad. well done though.

Wow! thats soo, it almost made me cry! it flowed really great! i love how its someone talking to their mother, great job!

And yet, another poem of yours that left me breathless. The feeling in this was so powerful. It's very well-written. Great job!

.:CiNdY:.

I love how you used the words "mummy" and "daddy", it really placed emphasis on the love expressed through the poem, making the turnout of it all the more effective, in a bitter sense.
Well written, keep it up!

This poem and so deep and touching... its really emotional. The way it was written was soo beautiful! I loved the flow, the word choice, and the concept. Its was soo moving... 5/5 and it more than deserves it!