Comments : Is Daddy Coming Home?

  • 11 years ago

    by Georgia

    This was so touching it made me teary...
    but i still loved it
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Sharni

    Hey if u read this and that poem is True i have to say something your mother will always love you trust me im 15 and i have put my mother through hell i have ran away from home i've tryed killing myself i have tryed everything im now pregnant and live with my 20 year old boyfriend and guess where i am right now at my mothers you mother will always love you

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Disgrace

    It was sad but good. You did a good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! I almost cried, it is so sad. So real...........

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxie

    Hey i love ur poem!!It is so good! but its so sad..im sorry to hear that!it seemed like u were standin rite in front of me and tellin me in person everythin u wrote down! nice work!

  • 11 years ago

    by NoBeauty

    This poem is really touching...i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "Did Daddy leave because of me?
    Is he off searching to find the daughter I could never be?"

    relatable...... 5/5 xo.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jackie

    So sad, very heart wrenching poem. Loved the way it flowed, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Wow. i really like this poem, it flows nicely and the rhyme scheme is spot on. your vert talented.

  • 11 years ago

    by halie

    It was really sad but i loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Made me want to cry!
    Such a fantastic poem!
    Please keep writing!

    Danielle
    X

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    The rhetorical questions are really great making this piece an eye-catching and attention gaining one. Great work

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 11 years ago

    by Syndicate

    The was so sad! D: Such a wonderful poem that flowed so smoothly! And rhymed as well! Amazing! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cayce

    I really liked this one. It had a really good flow, and you could feel just how sad the little girl was. I liked how you put "Mummy" instead of "Mommy" you could actually tell how the little girl sounded.

    The only thing I saw wrong was:
    "Mummy, why won't you look at me?
    All you do is cry cos I look like Daddy."

    Me and Daddy didn't really rhyme, but I loved this poem so much I didn't really care. Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow,
    this is an amazing poem. i rlly enjoeyd readin this. im goin through this n ii can rlly feel ur pain in this. the poem is strong through the whole thing to the end. love it.. well deserved 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    That was brilliant, It made me cry though very sad. well done though.

  • 11 years ago

    by Emilline

    Wow! thats soo, it almost made me cry! it flowed really great! i love how its someone talking to their mother, great job!

  • And yet, another poem of yours that left me breathless. The feeling in this was so powerful. It's very well-written. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 11 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I love how you used the words "mummy" and "daddy", it really placed emphasis on the love expressed through the poem, making the turnout of it all the more effective, in a bitter sense.
    Well written, keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem and so deep and touching... its really emotional. The way it was written was soo beautiful! I loved the flow, the word choice, and the concept. Its was soo moving... 5/5 and it more than deserves it!