Let It Rain

by Nobodys Hero   Oct 24, 2007

Crystal droplets falling
Crimson rivers flow
A silence eternally deafening
A beauty forever unknown

Cries of pure torture
Screams of brutal pain
To walk among the living
Blind to those slain

Flames eternally burning
Ice consumes the heart
The darkness will take over
From emotion do you part

See right past distractions
Look right through the lie
Mourn for those forsaken
As you lay to die

Copyright © April 2008 [Published]


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  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautifully written poem. I like the words "Ice Consumes the heart"


  • 13 years ago

    by Lori

    Holy crap! Your word choice is absolutely impeccable! You have a wonderful way of showing how truly talented you are. The flow of this poem is wonderful. Its unique and it shows truly who you are. It takes the reader on a journey into a different world. Love it. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Amazing imagery! And great flow!

    Brilliantly written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Mello193

    Beautiful, gracelfull, overall astounding

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    he ones i read anyways.
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)