Look Up (Haiku)

Oh ..very nice
I love it a lot, ur 1st line was new for me, or i havent seen a haiku with such form yet
which why Ill add it to my fav.

the way u ended it, made an impressions too,
word choice just fit!!

5/5

A charming piece...

Forgive me for insinuating myself in here but, for some reason,(I think it's the laughing part) this haiku reminded me of a little piece I wrote years ago (haikus seem to have an affinity for each other..;-) anyway..

Crying Love
strong moon didn't laugh
song wolves danced toward silver blues
crying Love was found