On this High

by T uh Belle lll   Oct 26, 2007


I can't take it
I cant' breathe

I watch you walk a way
I cannot see

See my demons
See my soul

See the light
That's how I roll

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leah20

    This isn't really my style, I don't really feel this conveys any new unexplored emotion, and the imagery is kind of cliche. Keep working on it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short and remarkable. Brilliant write!

    5/5 ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Madison

    Where you really high?

  • 17 years ago

    by hadia

    Short, but good(:

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well penned. Great poem 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

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