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I liked this one.

The overall message of this poem is great. I loved your use of words. The title was very eyecatching and the poem itself was attention grabbing. Please keep writing, for you have talent!

Ally. x

Wow...
I love this poem, it's excellent, so deep and meaningful. The whole message of the piece is priceless. Every stanza is great. You have truly interesting and unique writing style. This poem is one of the most original in "life" section that I've read in a while.
Greatly done!
Keep writing :)

Well well. i've never read a poem quite like this one... it's so true and so catching. i didn't stop reading it once... great work on e the wayt youput this poem together. i raelly loved it. i loved every pieve of it.