Present Time Failure

by Joshua Grider   Oct 29, 2007


The stuff is addicting, and I dont know why.
I dont know why i let myself get into the situations I have already.
I'm so much stronger than the persona I see in the mirror.
I feel as if I have failed myself.
I strive to be better, but too caught up to do so.
My brain tells me "I can do better, this is'nt me."
When I was young I thought of my future to be bright.
But if my younger self saw me as what I am today, what would he think.
If nothing good, than I need to look foe a brighter, different Josh tommorrow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    OO interesting. I think we all should look abck and compare what we thought our future would be and if we've met that standard yet... and what we would ahve thought if we saw ourselves now back then.
    Hmm... jsut makes me think ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Good poem, but I saw a little mistake in it. Lovely poem though. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by NoOneElseComesClose

    Ohh ur poem is soo awesume. keep up the gud work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Lik eit! Very strong piece. Very full of emotion and powerful . Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    I love this. I can relate to the begining of the poem and it is so true. great job.

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