Method in the Madness

by Romancing the Darker Side   Oct 29, 2007


Trapped inside eternal emptiness,
Disdain poisons her ruby lips.
Madness is the cure for loneliness,
And her fragile heart, it rips.

Cured by the ticking of softened emotions,
She breaks through the cycle of fate.
No longer plagued by these daily devotions,
Twisted and surrounded by thoughtful hate.

Crawling away from this torture now,
She knew that she'd be free somehow.

    report violation
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  • 16 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Interesting write, i like the story and honestly i think it is a bit short, it almost seems like something was missing.

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Madness is the cure for loneliness,
    And her fragile heart, it rips
    -wow

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I would love for this to have been a little longer. it would have made it much more great. but despite the length it was good. I felt a sense of hope for this girl.
    which was a great thing to put in the poem.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Short... But excellent poem... I like it... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very deep and meaningful poem. The word choice was excellent! Not to mention the flow being astonishing and the concept being DEEP. 5/5 for ANOTHER great write! :P Looking forward to reading more from you ;)

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