Longing

by stillmomsgirl   Oct 29, 2007


When
When will the weakness come over me
When will I stop breathing, feeling, thinking
When will I stop the struggle and turn myself
over to the coward that has always been inside me
When will the heart stop beating, the brain stop thinking, the eyes stop seeing
When, please tell me when
Because thats what Im waiting for

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    I really like this poem b/c i can relate to it...there has been days were i felt like i just wanted my body to shut down so i could think straight...also thanks for the comment=-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I like it :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Good work...sorry..:0

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very sad poem...but i like it! (I can so relate) Very well written and descriptive....keep up the god work! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

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