Alone

by Pete   Oct 31, 2007


I'm alone; so alone. No time to stop or wait.
Rest of my days in a daze can't concentrate.
Had the one and she's gone, what a terrible state.
My life's incomplete; I can't compete with the hate.
Aimed at no-one yet at all I'm appallingly irate.
Why even persist to exist if I'm living sedate?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written at the same time.

    Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion, which isn't always easy to do.

    I loved the ending, I found it to be very intense and hard hitting.

    Beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, i honestly thought that was amazing, the way you expressed the words in this piece, and the words you used were so descriptive. the flow was amazing, loved how you kept to the one rhyme, beautifully written piece, it had a lot of emotion, and was truly such a great poem. 5/5

    nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    Loved it, short but powerful, absolutley love the rhyming technique used in this piece. It really flows well.

    Excellent

    5/5

    Gary.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Greay poem, loved the way it rhymed

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