A mothers loves a blessing

by sammie   Nov 1, 2007


A mothers loves a blessing,
No matter where your home,
Keep her while she's missing,
Cause you'll miss her when she's gone,
I love her eyes in childhood,
Keeping us warm and Grey,
For you'll never miss ya mothers love,
Till she's buried beneath the clay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Wow, thats like a very ahmazing poem. i {heart} it muchly! 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    Its good, and i like it...ill give u a 5,
    iys a very ture poems,
    its cool, i cant wait for more!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darkness In its prime

    I loved this,
    it's so true
    i never missed my mother
    untill i had to bury her.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    The subject and word choice of this opem is very good. the rythm could be improved in the last line, but other than that, great job! i cant relate as much as i'd like, but its still a very nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I'd love to say I can relate; But I can't. I wish I could have this relationship with my mother.... Nice poem, had a good flow to it all; Check out some of mine =] 5/5

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