Goodbye

by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX   Nov 1, 2007


Dear mom and dad

Look, i know you love me and all
ANd i do love you back
Its just I cant cause anymore pain to you
BY the way i act

I want to commit suicide
There's no point to live
My fate is going to end
I hate where i live

I love you guys i do
it just i cant live any more
I'm sorry but i have to do this now
My tears shall no longer pour

I'm sorry for how i take my anger out on you
ANd i am sorry i dont meet your expections
bye the time you find this
I shall be gone to another demention

I love you and goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    I'm glad that you changed your mind (or were you found in time).
    Once (upon a time (sorry, I'm lacking sleep)) I thought about comitting suicide aswell, but I thought "Hell no!!! I'm not gonna give them that satisfaction, of getting rid of me that easily! If they want me to die, they'll have to kill me themself!!!!!"

    I can feel your emotions and relate to them. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Real good poem! loved the theme in it.. try and perhaps work a bit on the spelling mistakes it'll highten the experience 4 / 5 :D
    regards Arun

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