For her

by Veamm   Nov 2, 2007


For her

Sweet smiles and rosy cheeks
Your angelic voice kneads
Every thrill of your touch
the presence of your kiss

Your face rooted in my mind
Your name written in my flesh
Your presence encarved in my skin
to be treasured in my heart

Sanctified dead skin cells
embedded within my eyes
Remnants of your memories
implanted beneath my mind

Its not my best, but this one is really important to me,
For my Tita Dory, died Oct 31, 07

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Aww I am sorry for loss, but u written very beauitful, tho!

  • Aww, I'm sorry for your loss. That's how I felt when my grandma died. I loved it though. You expressed the feeling well.

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    This held some great emotion in it. It was so beautiful and the vocab was just amazing. It was truely a great piece. The flow was just flawless throughout the whole thing.

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Cguro nga pare for you indi toh pinakamagandang poem moh.. but believe me, this one is the saddest one and pare it touched my heart. again, sorry about your aunt. sweet moh pare 'coz u made a poem for her if she's here she'll appreciate it a lot...
    bsta that's part of life.