Never Ending Silence

by Mommy And Me   Nov 5, 2007


Never Ending Silence

A silence fills her mind
As her heart screams over his soul

Blood smears upon her hands
Breaking her lovely embrace

Cold shivers run through her spine
Canceling her happy thoughts

Dead thoughts ripped her to pieces
Drowning her innocence

Canceling her happy thoughts
Cold shivers run through her spine

Breaking her lovely embrace
Blood smears upon her hands

As her heart screams over his soul
A silence fills her mind

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    This is really good. It has good ummmmm (this is wat u get 4 not payin attention in english) IMAGERY its really good. and canceling happy thoughts never thought of it that way.....

    PLZ rate soma mine.....THANKS

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    I loved it
    5/5
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Althought this peice was short the emotion held within every word was amazing. I loved it. I felt the pain and that was great. Again, great job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Ohhhh... I love this... It is equally filled with sadness and captivating yet painful beauty. Greatly written piece, with so vivid and effective imagery. This truly touched me in many ways and I can relate to the feelings that you excellently portrayed.
    The repetitions added amazing effect to the whole poem.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I love this poem
    Well done

    though the world cancel does nt suit in here, cancel thoughts does not make sense to me

    Rest the poem is wonderful in strcuture:-)
    5/5

    take good care,
    Roxiee

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