by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Nov 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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I notice you so pale you're not the same |
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AND ANOTHER ONE! |
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"It's already lost in a doubtful eternity |
by Kaila
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Theres a lot of emotion and i love that in this poem it just flows together well |
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When i read it its like I can feel what your saying there is so much emotion |
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This fits perfectly with the piece before it. The flow goes on uninterupted, as does the rythm. Great job. 7/5 |