Unspoken Words

by ihrtschlepper   Nov 6, 2007


Words that should be said,
are left unspoken
and the person on the outside
is so much less than the soul inside.
to be able to speak
and show the feelings
bottled up inside
wold be to suceed;
to live.
so the words that should be,
are caught in the throat
choking the breath
out of the lungs
destroying the gift of life
masking the beauty of expression

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im not sure if i ended it right... if you have suggestions, please tell me.
i got this idea from a book called "Speak"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    I like this poem because that is a problem with a lot of people 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I really liked this poem.. its meaning spoke to me.

    It was really deep, and you did end it quite well

    It didn't end sad.. its inspiring.

    I loved it

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this. Really deep and expressive. To me honestly you ended it nicely. I see nothing wrong with that ending I actually really enjoyed it. The whole poem was breathe taking. Sad yet held alot of sweet grace within each line. I'm glad I read yours poems! Keep up the great work. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by denita

    It sounds goog. your poem is good.

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