Universal

by MusoXDanielle   Nov 7, 2007


If god is the universe,
And we are the stars,
Should we think more,
Of ourselves.

Should we not,
Put ourselves down,
We are stars,
We always Shine.

When people,
Put you down,
You should see,
Were all stars alike.

They are putting,
Themselves down,
Just as much,
They cant touch you.

Remember you,
Are a star and
Always you will
Shine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    I likre the way you have described, self belief. We should always strive to be the best we can. We can reach those 'stars' if we really want to.
    Well done 5/5
    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by David Ensor

    I like the message in this poem. very nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Erickson

    You're really right, people always try to put down others, but they can't can't away the shine of a star. Do whatever they do. Good Work, KEEP IT UP.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Tnx for the comments..dint u notice this poem and mine are actually the same..we just had our own way of expressin it..

    tc owiez...&( ^ . ^)& xx..

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