Memories

by Shinobi   Nov 7, 2007


I remember the first time I watched your smile
The beauty of your eyes at first stare
Now the shining smile hasn't shown for a while
And the beaming you is no longer there

I remember those moments of depression
Which either of us used to experience
I remember my sweet obsession
And your feelings that never had sense

The first kiss and hug, The first glooming hello
Those first little things made us whole
The love I had for you occupied me so
But now, your feelings are making me fall

A sweet quote keeps popping in my mind
About eleven roses, a girl and a shining mirror
The shining reflection could blind
These are the twelve beautiful things I adore

A deed is done, and now you feel blue
You might think that getting rid of me is clever
One thing will remain after the relationship is through
These are the memories which will stay forever

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Perfect poem with the perfect lexis used, rhymes and the flow is also awesome. This is one of your best poems I should say :) Love it all the way. So romantic and filled with love :) 5/5

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    This is a very good representation of your true feelings. It strikes home with me personally, as this is pretty much EXACTLY what happened in my relationship. I think it is very good. Kepp up the good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm this is GREAT! but u know what, this is more EXCELLENT if u put in ( L0VE category). but, though still u impress the readers coz it seems u had done a great imagery. even the structure was nice. so i give it 5/5 keep it up!

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