Run Free

by Vincent Thornsberry   Nov 9, 2007


Mane whipping in the air
Though it's made of only hair
Stands out straight
At this awesome gait
The wind ripping through your tail
AS though in the winds of a gale
You run with ungodly grace
Even at this ungodly pace
Run, run, run my dear
For there is nothing left for you here
Go and start your own life
go and live without strife
I let you go now to live free
Free of all including me

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Great imagery. =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Me back

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    This was really good! i liked it alot! u so r 2 better than me by like a landslide!

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    I think this is a really good poem!

    And as i read in your profile you love your horses as you said... this poem can relate to horses and also to a certain relationship with another... thats what i belive anyways.

    I like to two sides of the poem.

    Keep writing please

    Danielle
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Fairly simple but i think it got a message across. Liked the way it had short lines. :D Keep up the good job ok xxx alex xxx

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