Lost In Eternal Sorrow

by Nigel Oliver   Nov 9, 2007


Writhing pain, sardonic fright,
Lucid ambiance, all's darker than night.

Rains of death began to fill the sea, within me,
My heart fills with acrimony.

Drowning, lost, i set myself free,
My dreams unfulfilled are now lost in that sea.

I have now lost all that is me.
My heart's now filled with impurity.

From the distance within,
I heard a whisper of doom,

Emptiness is now my tomb,
I'll forever be lost in this eternal gloom.

Copyright (c) Nigel Oliver
2007

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Wait, this is my favourite! I like this one too =)
    ~ Keep it real ~
    Nicole xx

  • 18 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    And yet againt, another great rhyming poem. The flow absolutely great. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 18 years ago

    by Cooper

    Beautiful. Truly; words written, dripping with darkness. Your vocabulary may just exceed mine, and this poem shows an intriguing talent, that I wish to consume more of.
    So, I will read more ...
    But I'm often too lazy to comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by dana

    I like it...it's very good!! i wish i was that good at writing poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    It's a brilliant poem. You must be a talented writer. I love the words and the way you express in this one. Of course you deserve another 5 from me!!!

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