by Nigel Oliver Nov 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Lose all your strife, |
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Nice choice of rhyming words. It flows just right. |
by Mandy Grace
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I liked it alot! five/five! good job! |
by Allison
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This was amazing! I love the way that you rhyme your poems, it makes them flow, and read, well. You are really creative and write with lovely emotions. *5/5* |
by Blissful
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You use of imagery here was just wonderful. The emotions were real and the poem was overall a joy to read. Well done *5/5* |
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This poem is really good... your use of wording is great.. you have allot of talent 5/5 |