Trapped In Thought

by Nigel Oliver   Nov 12, 2007


Searching deep within the depths of his soul,
He gets lost within the labyrinth of his thought.

Running through a maze being chased by his fears,
He runs blindly through the darkness,
Running into walls at each turn.

He runs into a dead end.
He is then devoured by his fears.

Lost now in a deeper recess of his thought,
He finds a puzzle.

Trying to piece the puzzle together,
He finds that none of the pieces fit.

Devoured by his fears,
Lost in the endless void that is his frustration,
He tries to find a way out of this endless darkness.

Trying to get back to reality guided by only darkness,
He finds that he is now lost in a depth of his mind that has no exits.
He is now trapped in thought.

Copyright (c) Nigel Oliver
2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This poem was so fabulous. Each stanza had an amazing flow and was mystifying. One of the best I've ever read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    This is a nice poem =) dark, yet I like it =)
    ~ Keep it real ~
    Nicole xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    This gives a great desciption of feeling trapped and is very well written. this is very intense. very sad as well.

    keep up the good work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love the way you put an emotion to this one. You're a pure talent. I love your poems.
    Another 5 rated poem from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    I like it. the ending wasn't sad, it was intense.
    throughout this whole poem, i could feel the emotion. i know sometimes girls don't realize it, but you guys do have feelings and are sad and down at times and it takes areal man to put his feelings down on paper. i think its amazing.

    i will comment more poems when i get on tomorrow cuz i gotta go, but thanks for the comment and keep up the good work!!!

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