You've changed

Amazing even in the end of your poem you still carryed that rhythemic taste well done

I know that feeling where you write whatever you fell regardless if it makes sense.

Ahahahah! ur funni, hun the best tyme to write poetry is wen ur feeling the emotions with it... this poem was okay, but it wasnt bad, i say 3/5 but u made up for it..

You was crying huh, im sorry for whatever happen. If you need someone to talk to ro something, let me know. ill be glad to help ya out anyway I can

5/5

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This kind of reminds me of my new one, I went the mean path, but I guess thats just because I'm a guy. I'm sure if the person you are writing this about read this he or she may take a step back and look at what they have done. As for the writing itself, it does need some work, but its still at its raw emotion stage, it takes time to form it into a masterpiece, it does for me anyway. Keep up the goos work, and I hope this person comes back around. ~Zach

It doesnt have to sound good or appeal yo others poetry is all about wat u feel ..so well done great work ..its simple but has many meaning to it