I Try My Hardest to Be Like You.

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Nov 17, 2007


I try my hardest to be just like you
Flirt and show people what I'm made of
But they'll turn their heads and look at you
And never show me one speck of love

I try my hardest to be just like you
Put myself out there and smile
But they'll turn their heads and stare at you
Like I'm a stupid little child

I try my hardest to be just like you
But I'm breaking down before your very eyes
They'll still turn their heads and look at you
Because you're just so very wise

Do you think it's fun being the fatter sister
The one that's not recognized on being pretty
And if people talk to me and look at me
It's 'cause they're just taking pity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by kla

    Awwww
    okay acting like a reader not ur bff soooooo...

    this is sooo sad but still really good i bet lots of other girls feel that when peeps compare their older siblings or favor the yougner one but i bet 20 years from now u will be all ur sis is and people will look at u not her<333

    okay but yeah u no i luv u and lacey but ur not FAT so get that outta ur head ur like me and everyone tells me im skinny so uh hello u r 2 and any one who calls u fat is jelous cuz ur better and popularer or w.e lol XOXO

    k

  • 16 years ago

    by kla

    Awwww
    okay acting like a reader not ur bff soooooo...

    this is sooo sad but still really good i bet lots of other girls feel that when peeps compare their older siblings or favor the yougner one but i bet 20 years from now u will be all ur sis is and people will look at u not her<333

    okay but yeah u no i luv u and lacey but ur not FAT so get that outta ur head ur like me and everyone tells me im skinny so uh hello u r 2 and any one who calls u fat is jelous cuz ur better and popularer or w.e lol XOXO

    k

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. I loved this peice. I thought it was another girl or person. But you tricked me. Lol. Great job. I liked the repitition of the line "But they'll turn their heads and look at you"

    && you swtiched it up in the third stanza so it wasn't overly repeated. If that even makes sense. Lol.The emotion was deep and the flow was flawless. Great job!
    5/5

    Amber...

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