My Captivated Heart Will Not Stay Still.

by ABake   Nov 18, 2007


I lie awake tonight because I am scared; Terribly terrified..
I was once called fake but sweetie, don't you know that was long long ago?
[Words have put miles in between us, I am attempting to fix the distance]
I am as real as the way your heart beats irregularly when I come close to you;

Sad but true it was [their] opinions of me that killed our love,
The rest of the world is silent; My heart beat is what gives me away..
"To your eyes and your lies, my hands are tied and my soul is bound"
My restless heart will not let go; as long as I am breathing it is beating for you.

"Why'd you have to go? Will something I say make you turn around?"
What was it that made you move your feet and walk away from me?
[It is times like these when I wished I said "don't go" and kissed your intoxicating lips..
Maybe it is time to throw away those picture..Perhaps we never should of took them anyway;

"I've decided to wait here for awhile..just to be sure you didn't make a wrong turn"
[My captivated heart is beating wildly, sweetie it is ALL for you]
-Your caught in this place in my heart and I am terrified that you can't get out;
Why is that you ask? Simple: It is the way you smiled at me everyday for the past year.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Another great poem....although it seems that every poem i read is all on the same topic....and i do kinda the same thing...but i noticed you mentioned somethen like that to me and i was bring it to your atention that you kinda do the same thing and i dont think it wrong im just sayen it!! but great poem!! keep it up!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Another beautiful love poem. Your title was amazing and the poem was flawless. The emotions were real and the descriptions of why you love this person were clear and sweet. Beautifully done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know I'd do absolutely anything for the one I love, and I now know that you would do the same, and thats how it should be. I just hope that they return the unconditional love you have given them, for you truly deserve it. 5/5 as always it's an easy decision when reading your work. Take Care GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Awhile..just -- awhile . . . just.

    mkay, darling.
    I LOVED IT.
    this is where you did a wonderful job with the long lines.
    Not that you didn't before.
    But, these seemed to flow a bit better.
    Plus, I just love it.
    I like wanted to highlight the whole poem and paste it and .. . like put " BEST PART **"
    haha.

    mkay.
    wonderful job.
    5.5

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