A Bond Like This

by Vincent Thornsberry   Nov 18, 2007


A bond like this can never be broken
It'll get so hot it's literally smokin
Please don't leave me behind
Because I can't hit rewind
I want this to last forever
I don't want it to stop ever
Please keep your love coming
I think about it and I start humming
Without your love I'll die
Thinking that I want to cry
I know you'll always be true
Thats why I say I love you
A bond like this can never broken
When it's so hot it's literally smokin

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Ooo. I like this one. =] Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I love the beginning of your poem it is really superb. YOU have a talent and plse dont stop writing. You would improve a lot. :) tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Ha. Cute. I really liked this poem alot. I found it to be cute and sweetly written. Short, but sweet and held alot of emotion within each line. The word choice simple but effective and the flow spot on. It didn't fault what so ever. A great read. Well done. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This love poem is so passionate it is smoking.
    I like your metaphors and overall wording

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I like this poem...Good Job 5/5

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