I've Got A Fear Of Flying

by ABake   Nov 21, 2007


Right when I met you, you lifted me off my feet,
I couldn't handle the happiness and you knew it.
Late in the night as you held me close, I whispered:
"I've got a fear of flying & sweetie you make me soar"

We have been invincible for so long; love is all we know
My fears are tearing me apart, and you're a part of me;
When this happens you [never] let us go...
When I am holding on for life, you fight my challenges.

You have always killed my fears, but one is still here;
"I've got a fear of flying & sweetie you make me soar"
I've started to close my heart so you couldn't love me,
You break past my barrier slowly lifting me up again...

I am shaking uncontrollably and your holding me tight;
For one split second I am not scared; but I can't breathe
I am screaming for you to put me down, but you refuse.
You say:

"You may have a fear of flying but I've got a fear of losing you"

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow i like this poem it is soooo sweet. you did a nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww this was an incredible poem.....the ending was just so amazinly sweet....beautifully written 5/5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    AMAZING. I LOVE THIS.
    I love the use of something solid like a fear of flying can be connected to being loved. It's so inspirational. This made me smile, and it was just so beautiful and full of emotion. You are VERY talented.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    You definitely have a way with words. I particularly loved the line "I've got a fear of flying and sweetie you make me soar," It's a lovely paraodox that fits in nicely with the piece. Great piece 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    Precious ^_^

    A little repetitive, but that added a fistload magic to it ^_^

    Obviously it made me smile, thanks for that random friend from the forums ^_^

    I'll be sure to check out some of your more recent stuff 5/5

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