In My Heart

by Lu   Nov 22, 2007


Picture Poem Challenge .....
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Mind froze in confusion
Each breath toxic to my soul
Tears flowing from glass eyes
As life drains from the very core
...... Of my heart ......

Let me sleep, the peaceful sleep
Take the very breath I breathe
If love was meant to hurt this way
I shall never love nor hold another
...... In My Heart ......

Please God send me back to the womb
Where I can find a new beginning
Erase the words that cut and bruise
Strip me of the pain of betrayal, that aches
...... Within my heart .....

Let me sleep, the peaceful sleep
Take the very breath I breathe
If love was meant to hurt this way
I shall never love nor hold another
...... In My Heart ......

Frozen in this tomb of unhappiness
Unable to break the shackles that bind
My mind twists and turns, never fully resting
Images dance with a smirk, again and again
...... Tearing at my heart .....

Please let me sleep, the peaceful sleep
Please take the very breath I breathe
If love was meant to hurt this way
I shall never love nor hold another
...... In My Heart ......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow.... im really amazed this poem is just WONDERFUL....

    Let me sleep, the peaceful sleep
    Take the very breath I breathe
    If love was meant to hurt this way
    I shall never love nor hold another
    ...... In My Heart ......

    That stanza was my fave... just reading that took my breath away. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read more from you 5/5

    xoxoxox
    Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a wonderful piece of work. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    This so fantastic, really, I liked how u wrote it, ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was so amazing. I read this and then looked at the picture and had to read it again. It definitely brought tears to my eyes. Very touching.
    This was incredible, written so well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    What a painfully sad piece. It fits perfect with the picture. The word choices and imagery are awesome. I love the repetition you used.

    Let me sleep, the peaceful sleep
    Take the very breath I breathe
    If love was meant to hurt this way
    I shall never love nor hold another
    ...... In My Heart ......

    OH this stanza did take my breath.....Love is one of the most painful yet beautiful emotions that we feel. When we lose that love and feel like we can no longer go on. Luanne you have captured these feelings perfectly.
    ~Bravo~
    Love Cindy

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