I Want

by Lu   Nov 29, 2007


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I Want ...
To feel your arms around me
locked in an everlasting embrace
smooth loving fingertips
to gently caress my face

I Want ...
Walks beneath the moonlit sky
to be swept away with romance
and even when the music ceases
our hearts to forever dance

I Want ...
Our lips to touch with passion
to feel fire sizzle my skin
trust me with your secrets and
your deepest desires within

I Want ...
For time to just stop ticking
as we get lost in each other's eyes
after the most thunderous arguments
know a rainbow will fill our skies

I Want ...
You to hold our love within your hands
and trust that you will never let go
even when silver touches my hair
still love me from head to toe

I Want ...
To know from this day forward
that you will always be faithful and true
for if you can not promise this
good-bye will have to do

Sounds ...
Like I want so very much from you
yet really it's not much at all, my dear
for it all really boils down to just five words
"I will love you forever"... the words I long to hear

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good, I could feel the poem and thats what i like when it pulls me in. Great read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Loved this poem ^^
    Great job!!
    5/5

    Your and awsum writter
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I Want ...
    Walks beneath the moonlit sky
    to be swept away with romance
    and even when the music ceases
    our hearts to forever dance

    This is my favorite stanza!

    What a romantic you are, Luanne!
    This is beautiful, what more could a woman say to the man she loves????

    hugs,

    Ingrid