Through your eyes

That is wonderful...Was that a tribute to your wife?? It sounded sweet like you envied her life because she lives it so well.....*I'm not sure if that makes much sense....but anyway it was a great poem!!>>>
Krissy.

I really like this one. :)

Another great job! I know it is hard but try to learn to live and be happy for you and the hell with everyone else! 5/5

Wow, this poem was created in such a unique way. I really liked it! I had to reread it a few times though to get the meaning.. but nontheless, it was great. Keep writing, thank you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Aw....i love dis poem so much it ade me realisie sumthin..
keep it up!!!
hope u read mines!