Hurting

by crystaljean88   Dec 22, 2007


I'm hurting inside,
But no one seems to care.
What am I doing wrong?
Life is so unfair.

I can't find love,
My heart is broken.
When I think it's healed,
It gets shattered again.

Can't keep friends,
It just don't work.
Everywhere I go,
An enemy lurks.

I just keep hurting,
With all this shame.
I will never be happy,
Life is just a game.

I'm done with it all,
I can't seem to take it.
Now I'm saying goodbye,
because nobody gives a shit.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is so good. I can actually feel the emotion in this poem. Seems like you're really hurt. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is really great...I feel like this lots of times too...love it. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    I liked this one i can totally relate. beutifully written altho so of the words where too simply (i feel) but all in all a good read.

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    Love the flow of this poem...i totally understand and feel your pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This poem was amazing. the only thing i found unsatisfiying was it ended with too much a bang work of feeling. it's a really great peace of writing tho. good job. and thank u for the comment u gave me. i always love to get feedback on my poems.

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