Broken Love

by crystaljean88   Dec 23, 2007


Broken love,
filled with hurt.
I always wondered,
Why we didn't work.

It's OK though,
Your still my friend.
I can only pray,
That this won't end.

You were my first,
The one and only.
You showed me love,
And how to be lonely.

Broken love,
Tears running down.
My heart aching,
Always showing a frown.

Now your happy,
You have her.
Someone so special,
But are you sure?

Think of me,
And what we had.
I loved you lots,
But now I'm sad.

Broken love,
Thats what you gave.
We would still be together,
If you'd behaved.

In and out,
Of jail you went.
Always on probation,
Letters couldn't be sent.

Things are different.
And so are you.
But the love is there,
Can you feel it to?

This is dedicated to my ex Brent..

we quit talking after breaking up. and just today we started talking again and all my feelings came back.. i want him back, but i don't know what to do.. he says he loves her.. but i think he loves me too

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The story you told was easy to understand and follow along too. I feel as if I know you from reading your work and this one was just a joy to read even thought the topic was sad, I think you wrote it well. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow this was a really great job at explaining how different he is. Well great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz very sad
    but it was filled with emotion that i could feel!! it was a great poem!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Another simple but great poem. I really enjoy the last stanza... Now you're one of my favs.

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I luv da flow of poem! 5/5!! it suckz wen u break up wid someone and den u want dem back.. i feel ur pain.. i hope u and ur ex will someday reconcile your love for each other..

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