by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop Dec 23, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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The trumpets sounded, |
by SweetSuicide
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Simlpy love it yea thanks for the help .. |
by Mollie
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Nice detail I like how it walked you through the whole scene... nice work. loved it, keep it up. |
by Crystal Gaze
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An Excellent write. |
by Lecrissa
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Oh wow, Great story.. |
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I like it a lot... Interesting and very unique poem. The story behind it is great and the rhythm that follows emotions through the whole piece is exciting. The twist in the end is very sad and tragic yet very effective. |