Empty

by jason   Dec 29, 2007


A long time of no thoughts
drifting through empty lots
no place to go
drifting off
from spot to spot

Time passes by
slowly starting to die
fading for the rest of time
waiting for it to end
asking if it really ever began

snow falls overhead
falling over a town
where even the ghosts are dead
no sign of hope
no spark of light
no words of delight

as the storm flows overhead
asking will this ever end
so cold
so empty
so lost
with out plenty

empty thoughts in empty towns
walking on the empty ground
through this cold dark place
where the body begins to waste

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    I loved the ending, and I think the rest of the poem only made it that much better. I like this poem, a lot.
    Good job, amazing job, kee it up, whoot
    -Krystal.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    The ending was really good. Very nicely flowed. But, the rest of the poem was a bit rocky.. The rhyming was kinda.. all over the place & not so well ;/

    It needs work; but was pretty good. I portrayed a lot of confusion & dark feelings. I liked it, overall!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This skillfully written poem does describe, in depth, dark feelings I am familiar with. The content of this empty theme seems to increase, in me, the desire to fill my empty spaces 5/5

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