Something wonderful

This piece was definitly truthful. It held such honesty within it. Portraying love nicely even though I believe you canno't describe true love you did a good job at trying here.

Thisn was a sweet poem though it held some errors in punctuation. You capitalized letters which didn't need capitalizing ect. But that wasn't enough to reuin the good meaning portrayed within this poem.

I liked how you used free verse to write this. I do believe toe structure looks a little messy though but that doesn't really matter because it's what is inside the poem. Not the outside. Kind of like don't judge a book by it's cover.

Overall a good read. Well done keep up the good work. ~Mel

Ilove this poem because there is much truth in it

The only typyo I may have found is
You will fell as though you were floating,
fell fall or feel?
5/5

Really cute, and really sweet, nice job! :)

That was really cute and so tru.

That was a really cut poem.

~love~