I finally found it : )

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Jan 1, 2008


Wow...just step back come
on babe take my hand
look at what we have become
and how strong we stand

for something better than
your love i could never wish
from the day this began
i knew nothing better could exist

i know, and you've proven that for a fact
no one could tear us apart
no ones ever had this kind of impact
i knew you were special from the start

your someone who makes me feel revived
someone i wish i could see everyday
from this cruel world, you've helped me survive
you are someone i would never betray

about you, i never have any doubts
to see you i wish for every week
your something i never want to be without
and i'm just waiting to get from you a kiss on the cheek

i know what we have is real
in God you reminded me to confide
and when i fall, you help me heal
to God you have been my guide

i haven't found one bit of you thats fake
by now, most would have made me feel degraded
i thought for sure my heart would already ache
and i would definitely feel jaded

but you are so much different from the rest
you never cross the line and respect
is something you give me without request
i find you, in every way, to be perfect

and to you i will always listen
in every way we just seem to click
i cant wait to see your beautiful eyes glisten
i still cant believe its me you picked

baby you make me happy in every way
what we have is something i have longed for
with you i know i will always be okay
you are the one i will always adore <33

*please comment/rate ill return the favor!*

(this is a poem i wrote for one of my best friends, she wanted me to write one about her and her bf because she doesn't write poems so i dedicate this to her and korban )

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweetlysimplyinlove

    I really like ur poem. i just signed up for this site and u said that u like to meet new ppl. so hi lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyleigh

    Wow, that was so good..congrats on the poem, you should get that published in a mag...or send it into a paper im sure you will get heaps feed back
    good luck for the future

  • 16 years ago

    by ilovetimothym

    Its on my favorite list.
    i mean it was like you reached into mine and sebastians realtionship
    that is so how i feel about him

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I second that. I hope all goes well for you with this. Live to love and love to live.
    -Kayla.

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Aww this is amazing.....I hope this lats for you.Wonderful piece!:)
    5/5