Game (no name)

by Tim Mauntler   Jan 2, 2008


What is love to you?
Do you think it's a game?
Played on your own time
What's this game's name?

Cause I want to play
I want to lead lovers on
Be there when wanted
But when needed, be gone

That sounds like fun
Invite me next time
You probably won't
That's just fine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    Again, you truly do have a way with words. Very raw emotions in this one, and that's important. I can almost feel the bitterness jumping off the screen, lol.

    I liked the way you ended it, I thought it really added to the poem. As I mentionned on your other poem, I suggest using punctuation.

    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Thais is really pretty, but i agree with Kaila i really wish is was longer. very good... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved this one
    Wish it was longer
    because I was hooked
    excellent write
    5/5
    kaila

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