Fairy Tale Ending

by Mommy And Me   Jan 2, 2008


Fairy Tale Ending

Nights in and nights out she feels her heart beat,
As if singing a song, wishing for some one to hear--
Days go by and nothing seemed to change;
She was still the girl, with out a name.

But every fairy tale has a happy ending,
So she kept her heart open, kept on singing.
Until one day some one heard those heart beats;
And they seemed to have the same melody.

Out on the dance floor, their eyes seemed to shine--
Everything seemed perfect, like it was meant to be;
But their fairy tale ended that very same night,
For he was off to fight his battle, on some far off ground.

They stayed connected through phone calls and email--
But like everything else, they slowly drifted apart.
She would stay online for hours, hoping to see his name,
But day by day, the song in her heart fades away.

Four years later she goes through the drive through;
And hears his voice upon the other end.
Her heart began to sing their song again--
And it took her back to the night they first met.

Within the power of a deep red rose he stole her heart;
And with a kiss he sealed her torn thoughts.
Fate had brought them together after all these years,
And they finally had their fairy tale ending--

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Kinda cliche title, but it did catch my eye...

    That whole interpretation was before I started reading and your first line caught my attention and continued throughout the whole stanza.

    But every fairy tale has a happy ending,
    So she kept her heart open, kept on singing.

    Those two stanzas give off a wonderful sense of hope and the analogy of singing throughout the first two stanzas were beautiful..
    One thing though, for me your flow seems kind of off. I am not an expert on flow so it might just be me before you get the wrong idea. Lol

    Okay, third stanza... I like your use of punctuation it always adds extra spice in the peice. Lol. && the stanza overall is sad it's like a rollercoaster. One minute your up and happy next minute it's gone. I am not sure if thats a good comparison so hopefully you understand what I am saying..

    But like everything else, they slowly drifted apart.
    She would stay online for hours, hoping to see his name,
    But day by day, the song in her heart fades away.

    Oh how I can relate to those lines. They are heartbreaking and hold such a sad meaning. The first line was a great beginning for the stanza..

    Oh boy..

    Within the power of a deep red rose he stole her heart;
    And with a kiss he sealed her torn thoughts.

    those lines right there are amazing. I love them. Aghhh. They are just so beautiful. I didn't quite like the last line it just didn't click for me. Although it did relate back to the title. Overall, a beautifully written peice. Great job.

    Amber.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Omg, wow! Amazing, beautiful stunning, I don't think there are enough words to describe how perfect I thought this poem was! It captured my heart, I fell deeply in love with it. Every single line was well thought out and the ending just made the entire poem together perfectly. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

    Thank you for adding me to your favorites. I've decided to add you to mine as well, darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    I loved it
    great poem
    :]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    *thought
    *died

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This poem is wonderful and meaningful. It teaches us that sometimes you have to wait ad it'll all be worth it in the end. This girl didnt have the perfect fairytale where she meats her prince and they lived happy ever after from that day, she had to say good-bye to him the same night, it hurt her that they were drifting apart, she waited for so long to talk to him.. and yet when she had lost all hope, and though that her love has dies.. she meets him again and he sweeps her off her feet.
    I LOVED IT =)
    take care x

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