Crying On My Holidays

by Fanny   Jan 3, 2008


I spent my holidays crying
but I'm still not trying
with my tears I can make a river
some how I cant swim in them forever
my holidays were not holidays
new years was like every other Mondays
Christmas was okay that day I wanted to run away
"Merry Christmas" I didn't say in the morning
at night of all the crying my eyes were glowing
"Happy New Years" I said at 12:00 a.m
the whole family wasn't hole
it was more like a unknown goal
crying on my holidays
was no happiness
cant say no more
all I say is that my heart has been tore

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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is what i was talking about a [poem
    with emotion hurtful yet still real. Its hard
    to tell someone you love thier poem even
    through it was painful to them. you know
    what i mean? good read another 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    Some parts didnt really make sense to me...but otherwise good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by ThisFeelingOfIntoxicationIsSpectacular

    Awe. I really liked your poem, sweetie. I kinda felt the same over my holidays. I really liked lines 1 & 5.. I found them very original.
    -xx-

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