I Unwillingly Left His Past Behind?
by FlawlesslyTarnished Jan 6, 2008
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Someone once asked me if I care about him truly |
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16 years ago
Beautifully expressed emotion and lucritive feather light meanings ... nice one X
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16 years ago
by Robert
A different poem I must say but it was done in such a very special way I liked it alot the flow was good the message abit off the wall but kudos for originality
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16 years ago
I love this piece. You picked great topic to write a poem and you truly wrote this piece greatly. I can relate to this piece in a way which makes it even more powerful for me.
Meaningful poem, very deep from the beginning to the end.
My favorite stanza is:
- Someone once asked me if I care about him truly
About not only him, but his life as well
And that's when I started thinking, "Do I really?
Or do I only care about the past on which I dwell?"-
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Amazing introduction, it pulled me straight into this piece.
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16 years ago
by Lemma
Aww really sweet, especially loved the first stanza, sucked me in to the rest of the poem =)
Em xXx -
16 years ago
by Michelle18
The flow wasnt that great on this one.. i think some of the lines were a bit long..maybe if you seperate them it would read much better... but overall it was still a good poem. 5/5.
