This is the one

by shamvi   Jan 10, 2008


I looked at my life
i smiled and frowned at it less
as i smile i pondered
about the sweet behind the bitter ones
i smiled and frowned at it less
about this life in front of me
these will be my memories
in case i forgot
those the ones I'll wish to feel again
maybe to change and end it differently
or just to feel the excitement again
as it's fading in my mind
and growing in my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    So simple and so good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    This poem is very easy to relate to and I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent. you write from the heart

  • 17 years ago

    by halie

    Wow dat wuz great
    i loved it
    :]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    So simple to see how you put words together. U r good! this is great! Thanks for the comment on mine, felt thankful.

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