Razor Lies

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Jan 11, 2008


Razor tears at my skin
His memory at my heart
It's all I can to do
To keep from falling apart

It's been years
Everything's changed
He doesn't love me anymore
Nothings the same

Scars adorn scars
Tears adorn tears
All that's in my heart
Is pain from the years

He left me behind
With hope of return
He's not coming back
There's been a lesson learned

Don't trust the guy
That holds razor lies
It only leads to
Broken suicide

Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very sad piece. very emotional. very deep.
    ana amazing, as usual. the poem as a whole
    is wonderful and very well thought out. and
    the first and last stanza were my favorite.

    great write . 5/5.
    keep it up. :]
    XoXo-WilTED-ViViANE-XoXo.

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    "Razor tears at my skin
    His memory at my heart
    It's all I can to do
    To keep from falling apart"

    that was my favourite stanza.
    great poem, i didn't see any mistakes.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow i love it <333

  • 16 years ago

    by The Tears I bleed

    I love the last stanza!!

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