Wow, so powerful and amazing!! I love the emotion poured into this poem!! Good work!
11 years ago
That is a very sad poem, but a reality for many girls and women. Very well-written, especially how in the poem the admittance is made that so badly wanting to be loved can cause more pain in the end. Great job.
I can so totally relate to what it is your saying in this poem. This was a truely inspiring piece.
Is there something wrong with me?
If not then why do you not love me?
No matter how much I care or love you
I cannot get you to love me back
^^^This was my overall favorite stanza. it expressed so many emotions that I can relate to. I used to feel like this for an ex. it took me so long to realiza that he just wasn't worth it. this poem may have been sad but i still really liked it, you are very talented. Keep up the great work and thnx for the kind words. 5/5