Don't give up on what you once said was most important to you

by Behind Blue Eyes   Jan 17, 2008


Tossing and turning all night long
From dreams that you've been haunting.
Waking up with my blankets askew
From nighttime, subconscious taunting.
It's obvious that I'm
Not over you.
And with you in my dreams every night
I'm sure that will always ring true.
I just can't get you off my mind
And it seems like you want to stay there
But sometimes, just sometimes,
It's a bit more than I can bare.
I'm trying to live my life
Without you, somehow, in it.
But our past is still too much of my present
I just can't seem to forget it.
But you go on with you life
Without even a worry about me.
And if you say that that's a lie
Than come on and prove it to be.
You just up and left me
Without ever looking back
Whether it hurt you or not
Emotions you lacked.
So if I was ever important to you
Then please, for me, do one thing,
I just want to resurrect our friendship, nothing more
For that, I'd give up anything.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dan

    Beautiful poem. The emotion was very evident and powerful. Great job and I know that feeling very well.

    -Daniel

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Oh, I forgot. Don't forget to edit the poem and change this:

    "Itâ??s obvious that I'm " to "It's obvious that I'm"

    ~sorry, I forgot to put that in my previous comment

    sdpw

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    "But our past is still too much of my present
    I just can't seem to forget it."

    ~Incredible lines, right there
    A+ on creativity, although I could careless if that line is or isn't cliche. =]]]]

    The only error I saw in this poem was
    "Than come on and prove it to be." = "Than come on and prove it to Me."

    and that's it.

    This is a beautiful poem. It rings upon a cliche idea and brings a little "umph" to it. I found that it did lack an order of events, but I found that was quite alright at the same time =]

    You did a wonderful job on this poem,
    and I can very much so relate it to how I am feeling right now.

    Good job!

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by i less then 3 you

    Wow great poem lollz
    pleez comment one of mine lollz

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