by Paige Lea Jan 19, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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"I promise I'll try harder |
by Melanie
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I had to read it twice to understand what you meant by the last two lines because when I write a poem somtimes the last two lines are what I want. so for a second I didnt understand but now I do. lol it was good though I liked it |
by Alexandraa
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Great ! |
by she
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Good poem,good flow |
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Nice job on the poem :) i really like the last line it has a really big impact. GrEaT jOb! |
by Em
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It's a very nice poem, and I think you write it good and with a nice flow ^^ |