Crushing, Hurting, And Finally...Dieing

by Alexander   Jan 20, 2008


Its so dark,
i cant see a thing.
Were am i,
What does this mean?

I am scared.
Tears start to fall,
why am i here?
Who is infront of me?

Screams fall from my lips
the pain is so intense,
whats happening to me?
Why am i hurting?

A voice i hear
deep and silky,
it is calling for me...
the grim reaper

I run to his embrace,
to the only warmth around.
This pain has driven me
to were i am no longer free.

My eyes start to close
As i give in to temptation,
I dont know why i fought death so hard
when there was no reason for me to live in the first place.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Wow. the poem really connected to me cause when i was young i was almost dying and i was thinking the same things .anyways loved the poem im adding this to my faves

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was amazing! although on this line
    "what happening to me?"
    you need to add an"s" to "what"

    other than that, great. i can actually visualize running to the grim reaper :P

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I like this one although there were spelling mistakes but it's probably just a mistype.. sad poems really gets to me =( nice poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow great poem!!!
    it was very well written!
    keep up the great work!!!

    <3 i love you silly

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