Eternity

by EssenceOfLace   Jan 20, 2008


It doesn't matter what you say
or what you do
no matter what
Ill always love you.

You can hate me
and you can love her
but i will love you
for always and ever.

It doesnt matter
that you broke my heart in two
it just means that now
each half belongs to you.

You can make me cry
And hate the world around me
but ill still love you
for all of eternity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good poem. Well-written, the flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

    (this could be in the "lost love" section)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I really liked this. The simplicity of the words added to the piece.
    It was really sweet, and like other's... I really loved these lines..

    It doesnt matter
    that you broke my heart in two
    it just means that now
    each half belongs to you.

    Very creative, and sweet.

    Excellent.
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    It doesnt matter
    that you broke my heart in two
    it just means that now
    each half belongs to you.
    Wow I lovvvvvvve these lines... *thumbs up*

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I totally know exactly what you were feeling in this poem. I've been in this situation before. You wrote the poem with so much emotion and it's really well written. Great job! 6/5

    .:CiNdY:.

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