Trip with my family

by waiting 4 some1   Jan 20, 2008


The sun was shining and warm
The sky was clean and blue

The sand was perfectly pure
They reminded me of you

The wind was refreshing
The clouds have passed through

It was a trip with my family
But I was thinking about you

you are always in my mind.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Hmmm... I like this poem very much. Wonderful work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Soo lovely poem short but very touching.
    thx for ur comment and i want to tell u that everything i wrote is something really happend in my life or my real feeling toward something or somebody. sooo is a true one but don't be sorry for me ;-) coz really that teach me a lot. keep written :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Salwa

    So beautiful....simple and deep. love it.

    salwa~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Beautiful!!!
    Short and sweet.
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Hey
    Isnt the desert od dubai amazin
    specially when its winter ;)

    Really sweet poem
    loved it 5/5

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