THE DARK AGES

by jeligirl   Jan 22, 2008


Help!

her life is in danger.
she's out of control
she needs help!
NOW!

the scars on her wrist
a reminder of her pain
the trigger pulled,
and nothing but air.
over what?

a stupid guy,
who wouldn't give her the time of day-
just to talk

he stood there in doubt
not accepting what was possible
not realizing it was his fault!

she NEEDED help!
and you were the only one
who could give her that.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by StandStill

    Aw. amazing poem. i wish guys wouldn't screw with girls heads so much. es muy estupido....lol. loved it, keep it comin

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawn Goodwin

    I LOVE THIS Poem and I think u could be a famous poet with these

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Deep and dark a very scary poem
    what when someone won't love you
    like you love them read the lyrics to <staind> everything changes

  • 17 years ago

    by Trying to let go of reality

    This is was a good poem. It kept m wanting more and on the edge of my seat sort of say. But it was good and u can tell that u put real feeling in2 it. 5/5

    -Alex ;)

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